You will learn
- Restate the thesis.
- Summarise main points.
- Add a final thought.
- Avoid new information.
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Student lesson
- Restate the thesis.
- Sum up key points.
- Add a final thought.
- Check nothing new appears.
Words to know
the closing section of an essay
to say again in different words
a closing idea for the reader to remember
a point not yet discussed
1. Discover: Closing the walkway essay
In short, a covered walkway would keep pupils dry, on time and ready to learn. The mud, the missed lessons and the willing parents all show that the walkway is both needed and possible. Let us build it together, so that every pupil can walk to class with a smile.
It restates the thesis, summarises the reasons and ends with a final thought. It adds no new information.
Think: What does each sentence do?
2. Understand: Finishing well
Idea 1: Restate
Begin with signal words (In short, To sum up) and restate the thesis in new words.
Idea 2: Summarise
Briefly pull together the main points.
Idea 3: Final thought
End with a final thought or call to action. Do not add new information.
3. Worked examples
Example 1 (I show you): Restate
What is restated?
- Thesis.
Answer: a covered walkway would keep pupils dry, on time and ready to learn
Example 2 (We do it together): Summary
Which points are summarised?
- Reasons.
Answer: the mud, missed lessons and willing parents
Example 3 (You try): Final
What is the final thought?
Show the steps and answer
- Smile.
Answer: building it together so every pupil can walk to class with a smile
Did you know?
A strong conclusion often echoes the hook from the introduction.
Why this matters
A good conclusion leaves a lasting impression.
4. Explore: Close it
Write a conclusion.
- Take an essay.
- Restate the thesis.
- Sum up two points.
- End with a final thought.
Think about it: what did you notice?
You can write a conclusion.
5. Practise
Say it in a sentence
Use these starters when you talk about the lesson. Say them out loud.
- In short, ___.
- To sum up, ___.
- All of this shows ___.
- Let us ___.
Guided practice
Question 1. The closing section of an essay is the ___.
conclusion
Question 2. To say again in different words is to ___.
restate
Question 3. A closing idea for the reader is a final ___.
thought
Independent practice
Level 1: Start
- The closing section of an essay is the ___.
- To say again in different words is to ___.
- A closing idea for the reader is a final ___.
- A point not yet discussed is new ___.
- The pupils walk to class with a ___.
Level 2: Grow
- What would the walkway keep pupils?
- Which parents are mentioned?
- What do they build together?
Level 3: Stretch
- Should a conclusion restate the thesis?
- Should it add new information?
- Should it end with a final thought?
Answers are in the answer key below. Try first, then check.
6. Apply: English in everyday life
Write a four-sentence conclusion for an essay you have drafted.
Show a sample answer
a conclusion
Another one. Write a three-sentence conclusion for a short essay and read it to a family member.
Show a sample answer
a completed task
7. Common mistakes
Fix: Slow down and check your work.
Fix: Study the example first, then try.
8. Lesson summary and revision card
- I can restate the thesis.
- I can summarise main points.
- I can add a final thought.
- I can avoid new information.
9. Check and master
Answer all 14 questions. You will see feedback after each one.
Your result appears here after you answer every question.
10. Key takeaways
- Restate the thesis.
- Sum up key points.
- Add a final thought.
- Check nothing new appears.
11. Next lesson
Next lesson: Editing and revision. Keep going with the next idea in this course.
Exam practice
These questions are written in the style of common school and international primary assessments. Try them on your own, without looking back. Then check your answers in the marking guide. The marks are shown in brackets.
- What is a conclusion? [1 mark]
- What does restate mean? [1 mark]
- Name three parts of a conclusion. [3 marks]
- What should a conclusion avoid? [1 mark]
- Explain how to write a conclusion. [3 marks]
Total: 9 marks.
Marking guide and model answers
- the closing section of an essay [1]
- to say again in different words [1]
- restated thesis [1]; summary of key points [1]; final thought [1]
- new information [1]
- restate the thesis [1]; summarise the main points [1]; end with a final thought [1]
Score guide: 8 to 9 = secure. 6 to 7 = nearly there, revise the parts you missed. Under 6 = work through the lesson again with a grown-up.
Printable worksheet
- The closing section of an essay is the ___.
- To say again in different words is to ___.
- A closing idea for the reader is a final ___.
- A point not yet discussed is new ___.
- The pupils walk to class with a ___.
- What would the walkway keep pupils?
- Which parents are mentioned?
- What do they build together?
- Should a conclusion restate the thesis?
- Should it add new information?
Homework
Write a three-sentence conclusion for a short essay and read it to a family member.
Answer key and marking scheme
| Question | Expected response | Marks |
|---|---|---|
| 1. The closing section of an essay is the ___. | conclusion | 1 |
| 2. To say again in different words is to ___. | restate | 1 |
| 3. A closing idea for the reader is a final ___. | thought | 1 |
| 4. A point not yet discussed is new ___. | information | 1 |
| 5. The pupils walk to class with a ___. | smile | 1 |
| 6. What would the walkway keep pupils? | dry, on time and ready to learn | 1 |
| 7. Which parents are mentioned? | willing ones | 1 |
| 8. What do they build together? | the walkway | 1 |
| 9. Should a conclusion restate the thesis? | yes | 1 |
| 10. Should it add new information? | no | 1 |
| Total | 10 |
Independent practice answers. Level 1: 1 conclusion; 2 restate; 3 thought; 4 information; 5 smile. Level 2: 1 dry, on time and ready to learn; 2 willing ones; 3 the walkway. Level 3: 1 yes; 2 no; 3 yes.
Quiz answers: 1 B, 2 C, 3 A, 4 B, 5 C, 6 A, 7 B, 8 C, 9 A, 10 B, 11 C, 12 A, Challenge 1 B, Challenge 2 C.
Mastery and remediation
| Objective | Bronze (Developing) | Silver (Proficient) | Gold (Advanced) |
|---|---|---|---|
| O1 Restate the thesis | Shows this with help from an adult or a picture | Does this independently and explains how they know | Explains it clearly and uses it in a new situation |
| O2 Summarise main points | Shows this with help from an adult or a picture | Does this independently and explains how they know | Explains it clearly and uses it in a new situation |
| O3 Add a final thought | Shows this with help from an adult or a picture | Does this independently and explains how they know | Explains it clearly and uses it in a new situation |
| O4 Avoid new information | Shows this with help from an adult or a picture | Does this independently and explains how they know | Explains it clearly and uses it in a new situation |
Courseversity badge thresholds (overall quiz score): Gold = 90–100%; Silver = 80–89.9%; Bronze = 70–79.9%. A badge is never a full record of progress.
If a learner struggles
- Find the misconception: Rushing without checking. Slow down and check your work.
- Explain another way: use real objects, pictures or actions first, then words.
- Show a simpler example: Re-read the examples slowly and use the sentence frames.
- Guided practice: work through one example together and let the learner try the next one.
- Reassess: use the quiz again or the worksheet.
- Move on when the learner shows Silver-level evidence independently.
For parents and guardians
In this lesson your child practises a key Grade 3 English skill with clear examples and a quiz. You do not need to be an expert to help.
- Listen while your child explains the idea.
- Ask for one new example.
- Praise effort and careful work.
- Ask “how do you know?” after each answer, and listen.
- Praise effort, not only right answers. Mistakes are how we learn.
- Ten to fifteen minutes a day is better than one long session.
Teacher package
1–5. Objectives, prerequisites, materials, preparation, duration
Lesson objectives. Learners will: restate the thesis; summarise main points; add a final thought; avoid new information.
Prerequisite knowledge. Transitions.
Materials. Chart paper or board, pencils, picture or word cards, a reading book if available. Low-resource options: use chalk or charcoal on a board or wall, drawings in the sand, and objects from the classroom instead of printed materials.
Preparation. Write the key words and examples on the board or on cards before the lesson.
Suggested duration. 45–60 minutes. It can be split into two shorter sessions.
6–9. Teaching procedure, explanation notes, guided and independent activities
Introduction (5 min). Introduce the idea with the opening example.
Explanation (10 min). Teach the key words.
Guided activity (10 min). Practise together.
Independent activity (10 min). Check understanding with the quiz.
Assessment and reflection (5 min). Ask each learner to say one thing they learned and how they know it.
Key questions. What is the key idea? Can I give my own example?
Teacher explanation notes. Move from the spoken word to pictures and then to print. Read aloud often, point to the words, and let learners hear and say before they read and write.
10–12. Differentiation, formative assessment, common misconceptions
Support. Use the sentence frames and work with a partner. Extension. Create a harder example of your own.
Formative assessment. Listen to learners read and explain, ask “how do you know?”, and check the independent work.
Misconceptions. Rushing without checking. Slow down and check your work.
13–15. Assessment questions, answer keys, marking scheme
Use the quiz, the 9-mark exam practice and the worksheet on this page. All answers and marking guides are in the answer sections above. Re-check every answer before use.
16–19. Remediation, enrichment, homework, teacher reflection
Remediation. Re-read the examples slowly and use the sentence frames. Enrichment. Make up your own example and teach it to someone at home. Homework. See above.
Teacher reflection. After teaching, record: which ideas learners understood; which misconceptions occurred; which activities worked; which learners need more practice; and what to improve next time.
Sources and standards
This lesson is based on the sources below, and no official endorsement is claimed. Reference starting points: Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts, Cambridge Primary and the IB Primary Years Programme. Where a standard code is named, it points to the official framework.
Official standards for this topic area. Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts (official site): Grade 5 » Writing; Grade 5 » Language. These pages list the standards that cover this topic area; read them alongside the lesson.
Research used to shape this lesson. Common Core W.5.1d and W.5.2e (provide a concluding statement or section related to the opinion or information presented); Cambridge Primary English Stage 5 (conclusions). These sources informed the lesson.