You will learn
- Identify hyperbole.
- Identify alliteration.
- Identify onomatopoeia.
- Use them in writing.
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Student lesson
- Spot the technique.
- Name it.
- Explain the effect.
- Try one yourself.
Words to know
deliberate exaggeration
repeated starting sounds
a word that sounds like its meaning
what a technique does to the reader
1. Discover: Market morning
Lola writes: “I waited a million years for the bus. The brakes screeched, the doors hissed and the bus boomed away. Bright baskets bounced on busy backs.”
Hyperbole: a million years. Onomatopoeia: screeched, hissed, boomed. Alliteration: bright baskets bounced on busy backs.
Think: What effect does each technique have?
2. Understand: Sound and exaggeration
Idea 1: Hyperbole
Hyperbole exaggerates on purpose for emphasis: I am so hungry I could eat a whole goat.
Idea 2: Alliteration
Alliteration repeats starting sounds, creating rhythm and focus.
Idea 3: Onomatopoeia
Onomatopoeia uses words that sound like what they mean: buzz, splash, crackle. Always ask about the effect.
3. Worked examples
Example 1 (I show you): Hyperbole
Which phrase is hyperbole?
- Exaggeration.
Answer: a million years
Example 2 (We do it together): Sound
Name two onomatopoeic words.
- Sound words.
Answer: screeched and hissed
Example 3 (You try): Alliteration
Which words repeat b?
Show the steps and answer
- Bright baskets.
Answer: bright baskets bounced on busy backs
Did you know?
Tongue twisters use alliteration to challenge your speech.
Why this matters
These techniques make writing lively and memorable.
4. Explore: Sound and sense
Write with techniques.
- Choose a scene.
- Write one hyperbole.
- Add two sound words.
- Add an alliteration.
Think about it: what did you notice?
You can use these techniques.
5. Practise
Say it in a sentence
Use these starters when you talk about the lesson. Say them out loud.
- This is hyperbole because ___.
- The sound word is ___.
- The repeated sound is ___.
- The effect is ___.
Guided practice
Question 1. Deliberate exaggeration is ___.
hyperbole
Question 2. Repeated starting sounds are ___.
alliteration
Question 3. A word that sounds like its meaning is ___.
onomatopoeia
Independent practice
Level 1: Start
- Deliberate exaggeration is ___.
- Repeated starting sounds are ___.
- A word that sounds like its meaning is ___.
- What a technique does to the reader is the ___.
- The doors ___.
Level 2: Grow
- How long did Lola wait?
- What boomed away?
- What bounced on busy backs?
Level 3: Stretch
- Is a million years exaggeration?
- Is hiss a sound word?
- Does alliteration repeat sounds?
Answers are in the answer key below. Try first, then check.
6. Apply: English in everyday life
Write three sentences using hyperbole, alliteration and onomatopoeia.
Show a sample answer
three sentences
Another one. Make up a tongue twister and say it to a family member.
Show a sample answer
a completed task
7. Common mistakes
Fix: Slow down and check your work.
Fix: Study the example first, then try.
8. Lesson summary and revision card
- I can identify hyperbole.
- I can identify alliteration.
- I can identify onomatopoeia.
- I can use them in writing.
9. Check and master
Answer all 14 questions. You will see feedback after each one.
Your result appears here after you answer every question.
10. Key takeaways
- Spot the technique.
- Name it.
- Explain the effect.
- Try one yourself.
11. Next lesson
Next lesson: Idiomatic expressions. Keep going with the next idea in this course.
Exam practice
These questions are written in the style of common school and international primary assessments. Try them on your own, without looking back. Then check your answers in the marking guide. The marks are shown in brackets.
- Define hyperbole. [1 mark]
- Define alliteration and give an example. [2 marks]
- Name two onomatopoeic words. [2 marks]
- What effect does hyperbole have? [1 mark]
- Explain how to use these techniques. [3 marks]
Total: 9 marks.
Marking guide and model answers
- deliberate exaggeration [1]
- repeated starting sounds [1]; bright baskets bounced [1]
- screeched [1]; hissed [1]
- strong emphasis [1]
- spot and name the technique [1]; explain the effect [1]; try one in your own sentence [1]
Score guide: 8 to 9 = secure. 6 to 7 = nearly there, revise the parts you missed. Under 6 = work through the lesson again with a grown-up.
Printable worksheet
- Deliberate exaggeration is ___.
- Repeated starting sounds are ___.
- A word that sounds like its meaning is ___.
- What a technique does to the reader is the ___.
- The doors ___.
- How long did Lola wait?
- What boomed away?
- What bounced on busy backs?
- Is a million years exaggeration?
- Is hiss a sound word?
Homework
Make up a tongue twister and say it to a family member.
Answer key and marking scheme
| Question | Expected response | Marks |
|---|---|---|
| 1. Deliberate exaggeration is ___. | hyperbole | 1 |
| 2. Repeated starting sounds are ___. | alliteration | 1 |
| 3. A word that sounds like its meaning is ___. | onomatopoeia | 1 |
| 4. What a technique does to the reader is the ___. | effect | 1 |
| 5. The doors ___. | hissed | 1 |
| 6. How long did Lola wait? | a million years (exaggeration) | 1 |
| 7. What boomed away? | the bus | 1 |
| 8. What bounced on busy backs? | bright baskets | 1 |
| 9. Is a million years exaggeration? | yes | 1 |
| 10. Is hiss a sound word? | yes | 1 |
| Total | 10 |
Independent practice answers. Level 1: 1 hyperbole; 2 alliteration; 3 onomatopoeia; 4 effect; 5 hissed. Level 2: 1 a million years (exaggeration); 2 the bus; 3 bright baskets. Level 3: 1 yes; 2 yes; 3 yes.
Quiz answers: 1 B, 2 C, 3 A, 4 B, 5 C, 6 A, 7 B, 8 C, 9 A, 10 B, 11 C, 12 A, Challenge 1 B, Challenge 2 C.
Mastery and remediation
| Objective | Bronze (Developing) | Silver (Proficient) | Gold (Advanced) |
|---|---|---|---|
| O1 Identify hyperbole | Shows this with help from an adult or a picture | Does this independently and explains how they know | Explains it clearly and uses it in a new situation |
| O2 Identify alliteration | Shows this with help from an adult or a picture | Does this independently and explains how they know | Explains it clearly and uses it in a new situation |
| O3 Identify onomatopoeia | Shows this with help from an adult or a picture | Does this independently and explains how they know | Explains it clearly and uses it in a new situation |
| O4 Use them in writing | Shows this with help from an adult or a picture | Does this independently and explains how they know | Explains it clearly and uses it in a new situation |
Courseversity badge thresholds (overall quiz score): Gold = 90–100%; Silver = 80–89.9%; Bronze = 70–79.9%. A badge is never a full record of progress.
If a learner struggles
- Find the misconception: Rushing without checking. Slow down and check your work.
- Explain another way: use real objects, pictures or actions first, then words.
- Show a simpler example: Re-read the examples slowly and use the sentence frames.
- Guided practice: work through one example together and let the learner try the next one.
- Reassess: use the quiz again or the worksheet.
- Move on when the learner shows Silver-level evidence independently.
For parents and guardians
In this lesson your child practises a key Grade 3 English skill with clear examples and a quiz. You do not need to be an expert to help.
- Listen while your child explains the idea.
- Ask for one new example.
- Praise effort and careful work.
- Ask “how do you know?” after each answer, and listen.
- Praise effort, not only right answers. Mistakes are how we learn.
- Ten to fifteen minutes a day is better than one long session.
Teacher package
1–5. Objectives, prerequisites, materials, preparation, duration
Lesson objectives. Learners will: identify hyperbole; identify alliteration; identify onomatopoeia; use them in writing.
Prerequisite knowledge. Synonyms and shades of meaning.
Materials. Chart paper or board, pencils, picture or word cards, a reading book if available. Low-resource options: use chalk or charcoal on a board or wall, drawings in the sand, and objects from the classroom instead of printed materials.
Preparation. Write the key words and examples on the board or on cards before the lesson.
Suggested duration. 45–60 minutes. It can be split into two shorter sessions.
6–9. Teaching procedure, explanation notes, guided and independent activities
Introduction (5 min). Introduce the idea with the opening example.
Explanation (10 min). Teach the key words.
Guided activity (10 min). Practise together.
Independent activity (10 min). Check understanding with the quiz.
Assessment and reflection (5 min). Ask each learner to say one thing they learned and how they know it.
Key questions. What is the key idea? Can I give my own example?
Teacher explanation notes. Move from the spoken word to pictures and then to print. Read aloud often, point to the words, and let learners hear and say before they read and write.
10–12. Differentiation, formative assessment, common misconceptions
Support. Use the sentence frames and work with a partner. Extension. Create a harder example of your own.
Formative assessment. Listen to learners read and explain, ask “how do you know?”, and check the independent work.
Misconceptions. Rushing without checking. Slow down and check your work.
13–15. Assessment questions, answer keys, marking scheme
Use the quiz, the 9-mark exam practice and the worksheet on this page. All answers and marking guides are in the answer sections above. Re-check every answer before use.
16–19. Remediation, enrichment, homework, teacher reflection
Remediation. Re-read the examples slowly and use the sentence frames. Enrichment. Make up your own example and teach it to someone at home. Homework. See above.
Teacher reflection. After teaching, record: which ideas learners understood; which misconceptions occurred; which activities worked; which learners need more practice; and what to improve next time.
Sources and standards
This lesson is based on the sources below, and no official endorsement is claimed. Reference starting points: Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts, Cambridge Primary and the IB Primary Years Programme. Where a standard code is named, it points to the official framework.
Official standards for this topic area. Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts (official site): Grade 5 » Language. These pages list the standards that cover this topic area; read them alongside the lesson.
Research used to shape this lesson. Common Core L.5.5a (interpret figurative language, including similes and metaphors, in context); Cambridge Primary English Stage 5 (language techniques). These sources informed the lesson.